Monday, August 17, 2009

5th bullet - unwelcomed revenge (2)

walao am i rushing the story? i dunno. i find the climaxx not HOT enough... =.= neverminddddddd happy reading. i risk my life to write this story NOT! HAHA risk my homework and test results more like =.= enjoy ^^


Chapter 5 – unwelcomed revenge (2)

The three men dashed towards rosary’s bar and once they got there, acted like the few citizen’s who managed to stay calm under a fire alarm. Natsume helped hold the heavy bar door open with some effort, shino was supporting an old man on a walking stick with a fake smile that didn’t hide his irritation which was’nt noticed by the old man thankfully and kenji unplugged the cashier forcefully and threw it outside the door making natsume duck, then carefully transporting the old bottles of drinks and commenting “itll be bad if I threw these the way I threw the cashier wouldn’t it?” with a smile so evil it scared the wits outta the bartender who ran with all his might away from the scene cashier and bottles.
Reiko was behind the scenes laughing but of course natsume knows nothing of this ^^. Then they quickly ran up to join Luke who was no where to be found…
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Not bothering to discuss about anything, shino barged into the sound proof room dragging the door down and tripping over it at the same time so kenji shouted in his place, “LUKE?!” the three guys were greeted by a blood covered Luke who managed to cough out a “I’m alive!” To their surprise, the three old guys they were supposed to threaten were all unconscious! Natsume obviously ran to the injured luke and checked for broken areas or wherever he needed to stop whutever bleeding. As he did so, Luke told him that the old men were “clever” enough to realise their guards were down and ambushed him where they opened the door with a force meant to push luke down the stairs and succeeded. ‘so that’s where he got his twisted leg…’ thought natsume. Thanks to the action of these three old men, luke got pretty badly injured but managed to knock them out WITHOUT the needed information =.= shino crawled out from below the door and started to pick a fight with kenji for stepping on him. luke decided that those two couldn’t be trusted and asked natsume to call DX instead.
“good- uh… evening sir.”
“hi” replied a lady’s voice
“well umm this is N94 speaking”
“password?”
“ehh… elious”
“currently transferring your call ^^”
“sry miss.”
“oh that’s alrite”
-call connected-
“yes?”
“the men are knocked out but we have no information---“
[laughter can be heard in background]
“oh im sry continue?”
“so do we still light the uhhh fire?”
“yes. We have what we need. Dispose of them ^^”
“right. Uhh good night sir.”
“good night^^” replied a lady’s voice
“uhh. Sry once again”
-call cut off-
Natsume blushes and angrily tells the -trying to not to laugh because it hurts- Luke that it was the first time he called DX for this kinda thing!!
“ok. I don’t suppose I can run after lighting a fire so shino, quit quarrelling with kenji like a girl who’s weddings tmr! Come on over here! Ur muscles are needed.”
Holding back his curses and swearing, he carrys luke out of the room, down the stairs, and out of rosary’s bar. Then kenji took out a baby bottle of oil and a long piece of string. Pouring the oil scarcely in a large circle then placing one end of the string into the oil nearest to the door. Walking outside the room and signalling natsume out of the door, natsume guiltily took one last look at the three men they were killing and bowed a sorry. Then he realised to his horror that the oldest lookin guy of the three on the ground was a friend of the guy that killed natsume’s dad. Shocked into immobilization, kenji had to drag natsume out of the room before lighting the dry end of the string with his lighter. Suddenly, natsume started running back into the sound proof room mumbling that he couldn’t kill the man. Somehow thought, kenji managed to carry natsume who wiggled like mad to get free out of the bar. Finally not able to stand natsume’s kicking, he dropped natsume who immediately ran back into the bar rendering kenji’s efforts useless. Reiko thought that this action was very queer so she got out from her hiding place and got into the car to go to rosary’s bar.
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Just as Luke was shouting at natsume, shino jumped into the already all on fire building for natsume and tugging on his collar, managed to get him out of the fire just before the second floor collapsed onto the first floor. Natsume dropped to his knees just before the burning building unconcerned by his burns or cuts. All he could think of was that he had taken the revenge his father told him not to take. At this moment, reiko arrives and opens the door by herself instead of waiting for kumo to open it for her and runs to natsume. She half carries him further away before hugging him in front of the building of fire with one hand on his head patting it and coaxing “boys should’nt cry you know?” as natsume sniffled and silently wailed into reiko’s shoulder.

END
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